My new hat,
little black dress,
my hair falling free;
all for him.
He seemed so promising.
Maybe he promised
too much,
when he said
he'd pick me up at ten.
It's now eleven...
and I'm still waiting.
Author notes
Painting #1
A contest entry
- Beautiful Pic Inspirations # 4 by perfectsunset.
475 points, ended October 19, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Aww; this was so heartfelt
and emotional.
Beautifully penned with
such lovely thoughts.
in such brevity, you've created
a wonderful piece.
Thanks for sharing & best of luck -
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Thankyou for reading and for your kind comments which are very much appreciated.
Best wishes from 'down-under'.
Shenton
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to me this just embodies the prompt!!Picture perfect!!Good luck!!!!!
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Thankyou for reading and commenting, and for your generous applause.
Best wishes from 'down-under'.
Shenton
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