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My King

From the first, very beginning
there was a charge in the air,
I actualy thought I loved another
till I found what true love was.

So careful he was with each word he spoke
clinging to mine, savoring the flavor
he studied my eyes, as if he could see in
trying to seek the woman I was.

A gentleman he was, his mom did well
holding open each door for me, 
always giving the upmost of respect
a man like this, he must be mine.

Now many years later, it only got better
not only a "mc dreamy", but a great dad.
we've grown together, I his Queen
I count my blessings, I found my King!

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MC DREAMY was a nick given to a character on a television show, portraying the perfect man.

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  • SummerlandRayne gold member
    September 20, 2008

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    This is just adorable! MC DREAMY sounds like a dream come true!!! Thanks for the entry!


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