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Travelers on Seperate Shores

The picture perfect family
strolled the quay together
united in one heart
committed to forever

father mother sister brother
swearing not to part

The years swirled around them
life tossed them to and fro
with each passing of the seasons
the children they did grow

The picture perfect family
now cast upon seperate shores
barely send a greeting
and holidays are no more

The business of living
has set them all apart
the steps taken down the road
dictated by each life's chart

father mother sister brother
now four seperate hearts



Author notes

Thank you Steve Hanks for the pictures. I used Picture 13

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Comments


  • KayJay silver member
    October 4

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    Bittersweet... we all have such hopes starting out but few realize their dreams... and we're left to ourselves wondering why... and we stand waiting and wondering... A beautiful poem...
    Ken


  • perfectsunset
    September 17

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    Wow; so originally crafted.
    Lovely thoughts and
    so filled with emotion.
    I really enjoyed readimg
    such a treasure.

    Thanks for sharing & best of luck
  • Poetress52 gold member
    September 16

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    Wow

    The picture perfect family
    strolled the quay together
    united in one heart
    committed to forever"
    Very nice piece, great flow, good imagery, thanks for sharing