The picture perfect family
strolled the quay together
united in one heart
committed to forever
father mother sister brother
swearing not to part
The years swirled around them
life tossed them to and fro
with each passing of the seasons
the children they did grow
The picture perfect family
now cast upon seperate shores
barely send a greeting
and holidays are no more
The business of living
has set them all apart
the steps taken down the road
dictated by each life's chart
father mother sister brother
now four seperate hearts
Author notes
Thank you Steve Hanks for the pictures. I used Picture 13
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Comments
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Bittersweet... we all have such hopes starting out but few realize their dreams... and we're left to ourselves wondering why... and we stand waiting and wondering... A beautiful poem...
Ken

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Wow; so originally crafted.
Lovely thoughts and
so filled with emotion.
I really enjoyed readimg
such a treasure.
Thanks for sharing & best of luck -
Wow
The picture perfect family
strolled the quay together
united in one heart
committed to forever"
Very nice piece, great flow, good imagery, thanks for sharing



