struggling to stay on my feet
struggling to breathe
falling down
forcing myself to get up
the blood on the ground isnt mine
i did nothing wrong
so how is it i fail
or how is it my fault
confused and dazzed
i walk where i think is the right way
vision hazed
brain buzzing
blood racing
heart stopping
my final step is my biggest one yet
Author notes
i dont know odd vision just wrote it
A contest entry
- Give Me What You Got by peregrin.
600 points, ended October 5, 64 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Great, this is great.
I love it.
Thank you for the entry!
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omg
how do you write this stuff
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