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[ a bittersweet breeze ]

a bittersweet breeze
amber leaves under old oak
and our initials

In a list

A contest entry

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  • kendhal22
    September 16, 2008

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    This is beautiful

    Reminds me of sweethearts in the fall enjoying the season. I'm so glad you won the gold. You have a talent for Japenese poetry. Kendhal22


  • Arkbear gold member
    September 16, 2008

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    Hi Susie

     

    Bittersweet*....wow.....connect that to your last L and there is a superb aha moment.....lovely job thinking this out.....thank you for entering.....God bless you!

     

    Bear ~


  • Haiku-bless-you silver member
    September 16, 2008

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    Nice present and retrospective look at the faithful sentry that has suited many needs, some functional and others extra-ciricular. This poem stirs a lot of images and memories, thanks for sharing.

    Dennis