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cycles of beauty

colors interchange
thoughts connected with our life,
cycles of beauty

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Poetry Formed XXXV - by Bear
Welcome Poets! - You are to use ONLY, the Haiku' Form - &n

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  • Arkbear gold member
    September 16, 2008

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    Hello my Friend ~

     

    Alliteration is found between the lines....nice Tory ~

     

    I find this most deep in thought....makes me ponder more than most entries so far ~

     

    Thank you for entering....God bless you and I ask Him for healing over your body....I bind it in Jesus' name!

     

    Amen!

     

    Brother Bear ~


  • Haiku-bless-you silver member
    September 16, 2008

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    This poem is much more complex than its decieving simplicity implies. Nice one to ponder.

    Demmis


  • Griswold
    September 16, 2008
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    Wonderfully done honey. A nice Haiku. Love you baby...Scott


  • cricketjeff gold member
    September 15, 2008
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    beautiful!

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