I love the way you look at me
You make me feel so open and free
The sparkle in your hazel eyes
Shows me what I can't deny
When I'm loved by the pretty letson girl
My love filled heart swirls and swirls
When I see that oh so beautiful hair
I know your beauty is so rare I see your lips that I want to kiss
The pretty Letson girl is simply pure bliss
A contest entry
- Mystery Of Love by SummerlandRayne.
499 points, ended September 24, 2008, 18 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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awesome, this is a great poem, gentle and happy in a uplifting sort of way, love is a mystery, something we can never really ever understand, it hurts, it makes us cry, it makes us want to die, but then ther are the sometimes when we forget that. i'm glad you got a trophy for this, you deserve it, i loved it and expect other well to, lets hope the pretty letson girl knows how much you care
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wow!
this spoke volumes! a simple yet wonderful write! it was beautifully penned, and i like the imagery here! keep penning
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This is a wonderful tribute! Love is in the air! Thanks for the entry!!!
Az
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