Why must you do this to me?
You're killing me sweetly?
When your eyes look at me.
I know we are meant to be.
But why won't you notice me?
Hello I'm right here!
Can't you hear,
Me calling you.
Falling for you.
Oh why can't I say I love you?
Let's try something new.
I'm writing a love letter to you.
I'm dotting my I's with little hearts.
Suddenly you over my shoulder.
My heart bests faster.
You look at my letter.
A letter I didn't want you to see.
Not yet anyway.
Stop reading and go away.
You probably don't like me anyway.
Wait a sec you just kissed me?
What the hey?
OK now you totally just made my day.
Author notes
Oh my gosh it's not in song form this time! I beat that's what all of you are saying.Well I wrote this for a contest to hopefully get someone to believe in love again.
Pretty much the poem is about a guy and a girl who turn out to like each other and just by reading it you can figure the whole thing out.
So tell me what you think and such.
A contest entry
- Give me YOUR BEST by sapphireangelwings.
750 points, ended October 2, 2008, 48 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Tell me what you think.please no bashing.
Comments
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Cal why would I write about your love life? It be a boreing poem.
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i like it. it's really good nikki. at least it's not about my love life like u were thinking about doing
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Oh the things we do for love! This was sweet. Thanks for entering this piece. Best of luck!
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so who is this poem about nikki? hmm? there must have been someone you were thinking about..i think i know.
"would you like mushrooms or buggers onyour pizza mr. ------?" lol! j/k, i kno.
good poem, but i think you ment "beats" not
best"
very good!
xoxo,
--gooshawn<3
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No it's about a football player I like.
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