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Tears

i never new wat i had
Untill i becam so sad
Why is my life so bad
im relly mad
My scars are a personal ad
Are u like me with a fucked up dad
How can i feel this bad
im never glad
And im still very sad
But arent these tears all i ever had

can u relate???

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  • Shuberth
    October 10

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    Emotional

    good sad poem! i liked it... like the rhyming and how to put this feeling in a poetry... I Enjoyed Reading...

    Shuberth (I'm a Rhyming Poet)


  • Deathwolf Tasagka
    September 15

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    So sad, The flow of our tears, is a way to help ease the pain, yet it seems to only increase, when our tears are never answered. Great calling of desperationa and longing, I really enjoyed it.

    Sincerely,
    Deathwolf Tasagka