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Zoo Zen



Angry animals, almost attacked Adam,
beautiful baby bit baboons, big buttocks,
canary chirps constantly, calm cynicism,
dreaded devils dogs, defend dry docks.

Egret enters extraordinary, electrified, elements,
frozen feeble flight, fumbling forces,
glowing grounds, green grass glistening,
having hit hard, high horses

Iguana injures insects, in ingestion,
jaded jaguar jumps, jaw jammed,
king koala keeps keen karma,
lethal leopard, licks leg lammed.

Mighty mammoth, makes major mistakes,
narwhal never needs nobodies, nothing,
ornery octopus, occupies oval orifice,
panther paces peaceful, pending piercing.

Quivering quail quickly, quits qualms,
ravished rat resides, resourcefully returning,
slippery snail slowly slides, soundless,
tarantula treks tentatively, towards teetering,

underestimated unicorns, understand underhanded users,
vulture values, very viable, vulnerable victory,
walrus willingly wallows, without wishes
xylotomy, xanthan, xeroradiography.  

Yawning yak yearns, yoke yen,
zoo, zen, zoo, zen, zoo, zen.

Author notes

Not the easiest undertaking, but it can sure stretch the imaginative juices.

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  • Topnotchsy
    September 28, 2008

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    This is ridiculously good given the circumstances. Love the rhyming and it almost kind of made sense.


  • Ja Vorbesc
    September 15, 2008

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    That is the point of the exercise.You did well.

    Coherent sentences, order. you could use some punctuation to make things a little clearer, though.


    • Topaze gold member
      September 28, 2008
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      Thanks I don't think so, given the worst one would think you might have something kind to say. But you are you and you have to live with it, don't even try to pass it on! Yes I am here and I am now!