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Too Alive

I live
I breath
I consume
I grow

My diet consists of lives
My waste is destruction
Once you think I'm finally gone
You never know when I'll pop up next

I'm more powerful than you could ever imagine
I have the ability to bring down homes
To Destroy reationships, families and everything one's ever loved
To kill

I am the cigaret in the hand of a sleeping man
I am a match dropped by burnt fingers
I am an unattended stovetop at the lowest flame
And I grow into an epidemic
Leaving behind only devistation
I am...

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  • koganei55
    September 21

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    I like this poem a lot. The images it creates are very vivid. I love how in the last stanza, the images of destruction just keep growing...who knows when it will stop.