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Permission to love you

May I touch the smooth surface of your skin
as you tremble beneath my touch?
May I sing the lyrics that I have written
Lyrics that tell how you mean so much?

May I whisper endearments in your ear
and cause your heart to race?
May I kiss away that lonely tear
That has decorated your face?

May I reach ann touch the core of your soul
and feel your heartbeat?
May I caress the countours of your mind
and sweep you off your feet?

May I kiss the lips of your heart
and cause your world to shake?
May I become your great physician
and heal your heart-break?

May I speak to your emotions
command them to my will
May I tug together the cords of your heart
make you mine , until

You become a willing servant
and you bow in sweet surrender
and beg me to love you again and again
to make you feel this way , forever.

May I , with your permission
fulfill my heart's desire
and spin your world into existence
and catch your soul on fire.

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  • Riftkin gold member
    September 27, 2008

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    Thank you for entering
    and best wishes in my contest.

    rereading all to pick my favorites.

    Riftkin


  • peridotPixi
    September 15, 2008

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    i love this it is so definitely sensual i like the thoughts and the wonderful rhyme you have used in this beautiful poem, i like how you are going to become the great physician and heal heart-break good luck in the contest and as always keep up the writing,
    ~Amy