An unfortunate twist so shady,
of this perfect being.
Faced with this malady,
hurts to death what I am seeing.
Unheard of,
so profound.
Pain that hurts my love,
as he is bound.
Surrounded in this anguish,
not knowing what to do.
To take the pain I wish,
I would suffer for you.
Sadness over shadows me,
unable to attend.
To the heavens on bended knee,
if to cast a spell to you I'd mend.
For to bleed for you I would,
never thinking twice.
I'd pay to make you good,
no matter how much the price.
A contest entry
- rawr I want good love poetry!!!! by Live with a passion.
600 points, ended November 15, 2008, 79 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I'm impressed. This is well written. It is full of emotion and sacrificial love. If this is true and written from the heart as I suspect it is, then I pray for you and your lover.
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OMG look how u have grown. Your writing has went up a level baby girl, this shhh right here is off the chain! See, now i gotta step up my game. Look what u started.
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WOW! That was great from start to finsih you had me pulled in..
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