If you heard the sounds
deep down
inside my heart,
understanding this message…
Morse code beatings;
like a secret language
of loves lust,
an insatiable experience
together…
The noise they made
like an earthquake,
would make your eyes
hear my deepest secret…
Author notes
Lost my muse some time ago but trying to "come" back...
In a list
A contest entry
- SECRETS by TwilightPanther.
500 points, ended September 29, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - The Curse of Passion by Sokarjo.
1200 points, ends December 13, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, • Add to finalists list, or remove from contest
Eyes that hear...
Comments
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would make your eyes here my deepest secrets- i loved that, this was such a beautiful and subtle read but at the same time it felt like a darker lust rather than out and out love, if that makes sense
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Heartfelt with pleasantness. excellent
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Me think I have heard that sound before, sweet sound with feelings of delight. May yours keep pounding.
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Ahhhhhhhhhh the heart. Who can know it, its beatings, meanings and love. I would say your muse is returning and it shows here. Success in this contest.
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Whoa!
...And what a come back it is! This is a very tasteful poem.
Very well written.
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Thnxs my poetic friend
It was a one hit there...still have trouble writing..
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I thought this was an awesome beautiful write.
My favorite was.....
The noise they made
like an earthquake,
would make your eyes
hear my deepest secret…
WONDERFUL!
debbie
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awesome.
this poem is excellent! you did a great job with it. Keep up the Great Work!
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Hmmm...very sexy, a very erotic piece J. Your muse came back big time....good stuff here!
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Pretty
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OMG.....sensual words
Wow! Your words in this poem express your desires so well. I love the last stanza. Secrets......
Good luck in this contest!
Jeannette 
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beep beep beep beep beep
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Well I damn think your muse is coming back!!! Really strong words here, spoke millions...
Good luck in the contest Wolfie
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Wow!! Hun, your muse is back and doing fine. This is beautiful! The line: 'would make your eyes
hear my deepest secret…'. . is absolutely incredible! WOW! Just as beautiful as your heart dear one. Good luck in the contest.
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beep beep beep beep beep
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this is just beautiful Jeannette
nice come back, I need to do the same some time soon.
much love
Natasha
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WOW
and what a come back! the secret language of love and lust softly hidden within the code, like a message only you know...sighs...excellent! thank you so much for sharing and for entering...:
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Maybe your muse has merely switched languages and communicates in morse code too Great poem and welcome back inspiration
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Wow! This piece is so tender and fragile! You've definitely gotten your muse back, and I'm glad to see you back, finally! I've missed you
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I really liked this poem Jeannette especially how you've interpreted your secret lust into morse code.
Good work, nice to see you writing again
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