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(Read AN before poem.....)

I miss my baby.
I should have known
The most beautiful kind of truth…
“Happiness”
Pure and tainted.
I remember a time my illness…
What I fear the most…
Premeditated pain infliction,
Annihilation,
Simple things…
Ineffectual
But still I shiver.

She loves me… [not]
Reverberating laughter
Laughing at her bloody razor lines
Dirty whore.
A girl I thought I knew…
How is it that nobody knows?
Lipstick smeared boxers… language of comfort
One night stand….[?]
If…



Breathe. Forget. Breathe. Forget.

Attempted (Make-Believe) suicide
Simple overdose
Strong… or weak?
Accusations close to home.

Sissy?
Are you listening? [no]
I never meant to make you hate me…
Baby, these scars are for you
Sick desire…
The Pain is pleasure.

Tie the noose around my neck…
Unforgivable act…
Please go.
Spiders in my veins…
And the truth of it all is…


Nowhere is safe.

Author notes

Alright, so this is what I did. I was bored so I took the list of words and arranged them in such a way that it was a poem... but it was... different? anywho see if you like.

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  • Walking Oxymoron gold member
    October 12, 2008

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    Amazing write!!

    Sissy?
    Are you listening? [no]
    I never meant to make you hate me…
    Baby, these scars are for you
    Sick desire…
    The Pain is pleasure.

    My Fvae stanza...
    So many penetrating lines here...
    Brilliant work.


  • Fixing Tomorrow
    September 16, 2008
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    I LOVE it.


  • Dirty and Broken
    September 15, 2008
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    hm..some parts make no sense to me, but i like the "sissy" part and the ending
    that's amazing