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Darkness

Heart pounds quicker,
As it Flickers back.
Breaths get deeper,
And thats that.

But my eyes tell the story,
Need i say anymore.
Deep down im dieing,
For what i did im hurt... liein in awe.

I open my eyes,
And with a flciker of my eyes.
You see the guilt,
You know about the lie's.

Darkness intwines you,
You see death glaring back at you.
The one you loved,
You dont want it to be true.

Im sorry,
But my eyes...
Are the window to my soul.

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I cheated on the one person i love, and he forgave me.
But it was my eyes that gave it away.
And il spend forever making it up to him.
If you can stay faithful, do, because itl ruin everything and everyone you love if you cheat. x

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  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    September 16, 2008

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    WOW

    your words are so true!!! to cheat is to lie and to lie is to loose the love and the trust you once had...excellent thought and thank you kindly for sharing it with me and taking the time to enter

    • chardonnay
      September 21, 2008
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      thankyou

      yea i realised how true my words where after what i did.
      But he managed to forgive me and i am so grateful for that.
      We are working on the trust but at the moment what we have is strong and hatever doesnt kill you can only make you stronger.
      thankyou for taking yor time to read it.
      xx