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Wind Tossed And Sanded

suddenly it occurred
after the winds set sail to sea
total jeopardy

no one could compute
this thing was too astute
what a malady

pen and paper flew
this was unstoppable news
which angle to choose?

so much all in one time
the news mongers had a field day
other news lost in fray

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SHIPWRECKED!

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  • goalsv
    September 15
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    A great way to run with the prompt. Very creative with good imagery.

  • Melodies silver member
    September 15

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    A clever write, most certainly!

    A news view of a shipwreck is intriguing and thoughtful. Another sort of shipwreck is what we would have if the Internet crashed because a satellite failed. Thank you for piercing my mind with your smart poem!