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Destined Arrival

rejuvenation
relaxation's raspy call
what tranquility

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  • Arkbear gold member
    September 16, 2008

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    Hello

     

    Nice soft alliteration......not sure *raspy & tranquility* go hand-in-hand.....but nice imagery and feelings ~

     

    Longtime no see

     

    Thank you for entering....God bless you,

     

    Bear ~


  • Haiku-bless-you gold member
    September 16, 2008

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    Good aliteration in this abreviated glimpse of fall.

    Dennis