unwanted by all I close my eyes and dream
loveless and alone I close my heart and scream
though I do not understand the mysteries of the world
I understand this feeling and I understand these words
"Nothing in life comes easy" is how I live my life
I live in pain in fear and I live in strife
And although I dream of drowing in the ocean
I live my life alone and unwanted.
A contest entry
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550 points, ended October 10, 2008, 14 entries
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Comments
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Oh, I know how you feel. It was a wonderful write, and I like the rhyme. Thanks so much for entering!
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Lone and unwanted.. that is not nice I am always full of sadness when people write in this way.
The poem is well crafted
Best wishes
Julie
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good flow hun,
the poem its self was pretty sad
i hope things are ok,
if not i only wish they get better
keep up the work
love much
vanna -
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Hi Silver Demon
A very sad poem here and they are words that so many people can relate with including myself. You have expressed a lot of emotion and pain in this piece.
Keep writing
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Welcome to AllPoetry
I know how you're feeling... but it's usually infinitely better to live alone and unwanted than to end it, even if it's hard, because if you hang in there you'll one day find you're not unwanted and alone anymore. Wish you the best.
~Diana
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