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Devotion

Dancing to melodies
With butterfly wings
Performing ballad perfection
On delicate tip toes
With graceful moves
Elegant steps
She dances away to win
The heart of her dream
…written in years
Chapters of her devotion

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Picture inspired - picture from photobucket.com

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  • carole21
    September 17, 2008
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    nicely written for the prompt . . thanks for the contest entry


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    September 17, 2008

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    you paint a beautiful picture of something that i honestly think is amazing, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest


  • StarEyes
    September 15, 2008

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    How did I miss this one? When did you post this wonderful write! I love your take on the picture prompt! Fantastic!

    Best of luck in this contest!

    and love

    Nyetta