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The Varangian’s Questions at Byzantium, Concerning the Code of Justinian, and the Seljuk’s Answers.

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What is to do in Micklegard

   upon this holy day?

The lilac, rose, and spikenard

   are spread along the way

Where walks the good Justinian

   in Circumstance and State,

With Patriarch, with minion,

   with slave and magistrate.

 

What is to do in Micklegard

   that draws so great a throng?

The high, the lowly – none is barred,

   but push and press headlong

Towards the Church of Wisdom, where

   they stand in hush and awe,

To see our noble Caesar there

   condemn a base scofflaw!

 

What is to do in Micklegard –

   are kings becoming reeves?

Here in Sophia’s wide foreyard

   the Emperor reprieves

Or sends to death the malcontent,

   according to the Code

He made, with Senators’ consent,

   by aleph, beth, and yod!

 

What is to do in Micklegard –

   is Caesar now a Jew?

The Laws of Moses may strike hard,

   but they were just and true,

As were the Medes’, the Persians’, and

   as are the laws of Rūm

Now – by the Saviour’s wounded hand –

   here in Byzantium.

 

What is to do in Micklegard,

   and what is it to me?

The Code is just, and will retard

   the surge of anarchy.

It reaches all, it touches all

   and, though our lifetimes pass,

Still decadence will meet a wall –

   the fortress of Byzas!

 

      Good readers, lives indeed have sped;

         Justinian likewise

      Is biered and crypted with the dead,

         and sightless are his eyes!

      But laws are made and laws persist

         for every clan and race –

      You set your lip, you shake your fist? –

         they keep you in your place!

 

 

 

Author notes

Card IIII, LEMPEREUR, in the Jean Dodal Tarot leans almost nonchalantly on his left elbow, confident in his power. His thumb is cocked casually in his belt, and his right leg is crossed over his left – see how he is, in himself, a figure 4. His shield, bearing an Imperial Eagle (the emblem of the Caesars, The Habsburgs, and coincidentally Napoleon Bonaparte, the Romanovs, and the United States of America – truly an emblem of power, and of might, of war and of legalism) leans against what may be his throne, as though he has placed it there with complete insousiance. Of his accoutrements, only his scepter is held appropriately, but it is almost like a sighting-rod for his faraway gaze.

   He does not deign to notice us. He is like Marcus Aurelius, meditating on the life of a stoic; he is a father-figure, but aloof, content to be a paterfamilias, but also that his brood should be packed off beyond the door of his study – to boarding school if necessary!

   The Emperor is a law-giver, and a law-upholder (by force of arms if necessary). He is a protector, but also an arch-conservative. He speaks much of liberty, of the flag, and of the cross, but liberty extends only as far as he wills. Even the Caesars still exalted the words “For the Senate and the Roman People”!

   By his beard he is venerable – he smiles upon youth but does not suffer it. He is the “strong man” for whom the populace cry out, when they are sick of making their own decisions…

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  • pufnstuf
    September 20, 2008

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    Excellent!!

    Plenty of rhythm...smart rhyming...great interesting subject...this could be an allpoetry classic in the making!!!


    • Mairi bheag gold member
      September 21, 2008
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      Glad you liked it. I am not sure it is one of my best, but it was fun to write.


  • Saint Irial
    September 20, 2008

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    This is great, you know what you write of. It's nice to see poetry on this site that speaks with substance.


  • Maldronah
    September 20, 2008

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    Laws persist and laws are made
    for ev'ry race and clan.
    And will be followed and be broke
    as long as there is Man.


    • Mairi bheag gold member
      September 21, 2008
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      You are so damn right - and that is the irony of the poem! Thank you.


  • Talking Toni gold member
    September 20, 2008

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    Awesome!!!!!!!!

    This was very well written...Should fare quite well in this contest too...You have a great way about you telling a story in suh a poetic form...Thanks for featuring this piece for us to read ...I felt like I was reading MacBeth or Jullius Ceasar or somethin written by Shakespear...lol....Great job once again!!!~~Toni~~

    • Mairi bheag gold member
      September 21, 2008
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      Thank you.

      Last time I looked, there were only two entries in the contest; so unless our friendly judge decides otherwise, I guess this ought to get some metalwork to take home. That's not really the point, though; I admit I am competitive, but when it comes down to it, I love to write poetry, and I will only do so when I have something to say.

      Now, I don't think this is quite up to Shakespeare's standard. I have deliberately written like him before, though, as a kind of a joke: http://allpoetry.com/poem/4080451

      Anyhow, I am glad you enjoyed this.


  • whiterabbit.
    September 20, 2008

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    Somehow I clicked on this by accident. My hand moved when I was clicking the mouse lol. Anyways, I'm glad I stumbled upon this.
    This is a really great poem. It's so well written and the flow is beautiful. I love all of the historic references you've stated. I just love anything that has to do with history. This was very interesting and I can see that you are talented. Good luck in the contest.

    • Mairi bheag gold member
      September 21, 2008
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      I have actually telescoped the history a little - I doubt that there would have been Seljuks in Constantinople in Justinian's time, as they were an 11c dynasty and Justinian was 5th and 6th century. Varangians weren't heard of until the 8th century. This telescoping by me was deliberate, because I wanted to turn Constantinople into a kind of microcosm and micro-history, which could carry the story of law-giving. The whole thing is an attempt to express an aspect of the old Tarot card (again an anachronism, because the card itself is probably 17c).

      I am glad you clicked by accident, and I am glad you enjoyed this.


  • Blue Rew silver member
    September 20, 2008

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    An incredible talent that paints an insolent subject well. You capture the Emperor much like I would.
    I adored the language here that transported me to other times while the quest for power reminded of the now. Wonderful to add my work alongside yours. Blue


  • Dark Otter
    September 19, 2008

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    Hi Mairi!

    Once again, I sit in my chair going, how does she do that? She leaves me feeling inadequate as a judge. I am put in a position of 'just enjoying' your work because I couldn't reproduce it. Between Rew and you I see the External Emperor and the Internal Emperor. They are both valid aspects. If one is in the negative aspect, security and stability are threatened. I'm gonna give a 'strong critique' at the time of judging. Know this, at this time you have once again displayed your incredible talent that with my limited understanding can only respect and admire.


    • Mairi bheag gold member
      September 19, 2008
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      It was quite enjoyable to write, once I got going. Glad you liked it.


  • Amera gold member
    September 18, 2008

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    This is pure Mairi bheag penned with your brilliant insight and intelligent descriptive vocabulary. Somehow you manage to create a meter that flows like magic with a European flavor. This is your poetic voice and will last throughout the ages. Bravo!

    Love,
    Amera♥


  • Mirthryl
    September 17, 2008

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    Beautiful meter and language. I particularly enjoyed your inclusions of spikenard, scofflaw and foreyard. Delightful imagery. Excellent narrative, magnified to the understanding by your most helpful and insightful author notes.
    Astute perception of codes of law; they are necessary for civil interaction between individuals and groups, yet some seem more designed to maintain status quo...keep the weathy prospering and the poor, servile.


  • cricketjeff gold member
    September 16, 2008

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    Superb! First for rhyme and form etc, but then one expects that so it is hardly worth mentioning

    The content and vocabulary are absolutely top notch!

    NB2.NHB.NHBAA

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