Dance even when your heart is breaking
and your body parts all fragile sound.
Prance your way into the under-taking
the cup comes to the free, not bound.
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A contest entry
- Quick PIF by carole21.
1350 points, ended September 18, 10 entries
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Comments
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a sad write for the prompt . . thanks for the contest entry
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The syntax of the second line is unusual and refreshing for that. I think you should take just one syllable from the third line, it will flow better. Overall nice job, I like it lots.
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Thanks for your response and helpful advice lol
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