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The Over-riding Factor

It feels a touch like being on scales.
This inside good home in this outside pail.
On roller-skates, so often seems to sum it up,
the slipperiness-es angled with the bumps.

I'd like to keep my hedges all trimmed
to keep the 'light' from growing dim.
The arrow doesn't always land just so,
but if pointed in the direction, then let it go.

For on this side, we dimly see, and sometimes miss
but don't let this stop or hinder; I insist.
Some dilution may at times occur down here,
our faith may sometimes appear to look like fear.

But in your heart of hearts you'll always know
the difference will be in your innermost glow.
That sparkle that just won't stay quietly hid,
is a clue to the real you; on whose camp you bid.

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  • Ken-Maverick gold member
    September 22

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    It does feel like being on scales sometimes doesnt it?
    An interesting take
    Thankyou for the entry
    All the best
    Ken