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Love Overcomes

It's easy to ignore you
When you let the temper flare
But I won't let you get away with it
For we have so much love to share

Some days I think I've had enough
Then the wonderful side of you
Brings me a beautiful bouquet of roses
And your love comes smiling through

I know it's going to be
An awkward up hill climb
But darling you are worth every step
And we'll leave the hate behind

For our love is very deep
And with courage we will win
A walk through life together
A step at a time to begin

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This is a prewritten poem that I copied and pasted in this contest.

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  • Katie Lazette
    September 29, 2008
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    Thank you lost poetix for the Bronze trophy. It was my pleasure to enter your contest. Katie

  • mcheadle
    September 15, 2008
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    Conforting words

    When the flaring of tempers spoil anothers day it often goes on fven for many weeks, haw sad...mac


    • Katie Lazette
      September 15, 2008
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      Hi Mac, thanks for stopping by to read my poem. Yes I agree with you. How sad to miss so many days because of ill tempers and pride. Time that could be shared lovingly. Take care of you mac and God bless you. Katie


  • Unforgotten
    September 15, 2008
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    lovely

    familiar also--it's easy for love and hate to intertwine--ask my wife.

    • Katie Lazette
      September 15, 2008
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      Thank you lost poetix for reading and commenting on my poem.. Katie

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