I need you now
i need your love
i want your love
i want your passion
i want you to be my babey
no question
no planning
i need you as you are
i know we're on the same page
i can feel the heat coming off your body
i need you to be with me
we need each other
i need your hips
i need your lips
i need your legs
i want your body on my body
i want us to stay as long as we can stay
as long as we still got the heat
as long as we got the love
i love you so much.
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i just wrote this i hope its not to over the top
A contest entry
- Adult Pic Prompt PIF... by kiwigirljacks.
966 points, ended September 15, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think and tell me if you see any mispells
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Not over the top at all.. a piece full of sensual longing!
(I think L1 "know" should be "now" and L9 "where" should be "we're")
Full of love and sensuality here!
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thanks a lot
i just thout my 1st poem back shold be for one of your contest
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