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Angelic Teddeh Bear

 

 

 

 

 

Angelic smothered fur

darkened and rough

such imperial talents

of making someone tough

 

Chocolaty delicious

draped with such perfection

patted and so playful

the object of my affection

 

Mysterious and defensive

when others let me down

you are the reason

I no longer frown

 

I keep you close

nestled in my heart

hoping you wont leave

and we'll never be apart

 

Playfully you nuzzle

upon my silenced ears

taking away what hurts

and all of my fears

 

I love you so much

that no one will understand

no matter the distance between us

you will always be my friend

Author notes

Dedicated to my very close friend ... my Teddeh ... Jordan ... who has been there for me through thick and thin and will always be my boo bear! I LOVE YOU HUNNY!

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  • badnovocaine
    October 18, 2008

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    Haha this poem kind of reminded me of my little stuffed dog I had when I was a kid.
    Cos whenever I had nightmares or something in my dreams I would just grap the stuffed dog and like attack monsters with it and the monsters would go away.
    I was like two or three years old at the time but I still remember.

    Anyways I still sleep with my blankets i had when I was first born at the hospital.
    There really vaulable to me since my mom passed away it makes me feel connected to her.

    As for the poem it was a cute way to express your love for something so sentimental to you. This was beautiful and I enjoyed reading this.

    I loved this.


  • WolfHeart
    October 18, 2008

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    I love stuffies and keep them just as I keep my kitty cats. Touching and sweet poem. Playfully you nuzzle

    upon my silenced ears

    taking away what hurts

    and all of my fears

    This was my fave stanza.
    Good work with this! Love it.

  • dpinkierose
    October 15, 2008
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    hi,,I think your a true friend whoever is your friend wil be, as I read your poem, I like it.

  • dpinkierose
    October 15, 2008

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    the last word of this poem made me laugh...that is because if we suppose to consider angelic's teddeh bear as your someone's special, I know that if he/she is going to read it would be deeply touched in the first part, yet in the end, it could be disgusting to his/her part....hehehe.....however, the poem is a very nice gift for a true friend....


  • Beauty Of Silence
    October 10, 2008

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    wow.

    this is such an adorable write. it was so sweet and lovely and beautiful. keep penning! i love teddy bears too!


  • Fire Storm
    October 6, 2008

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    completely sweet

    such tenderness and love falls from your talented words sweety, hold on to your teddeh tight ,for sure he will never let you down as your potic tale, tells,,,blessings of light,life,laughter and love..Firestorm

  • thoughtsforu
    October 6, 2008

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    Teddy Bears come to life for so many in different ways. This is very sweet and a nice tribute to your poo bear.


  • notyetfree
    September 30, 2008
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    This is a very sweet poem!!!


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    September 29, 2008

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    Aww.. that's so sweet!! Just like you

    Very precious indeed hun!


  • Xx Emo Teddy xX
    September 17, 2008
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    wiat ....i forgot to rate it


  • Xx Emo Teddy xX
    September 17, 2008

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    awwwi love it babe

    it is really beautiful...*crys alittle*

    love you bae


  • kao3
    September 16, 2008

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    Ode to a teddy, I've never understood (till now) a woman's fascination with their stuffed animals. This poem helped me find a higher meaning to that love. May your teddeh live long and prosper, with your imagination he will never perish.


  • shehasstarsinhereyes
    September 16, 2008

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    This is a beautiful testiment of a childhood toy, i have a bear that my boyfriend gave me that hes had since childhood, and this poem made me go grab her up and give her a squeeze. Its great that you have such a precious bear.


  • Haneen277
    September 15, 2008

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    beautiful

    u made me feel he's my teddy,,, though i've never managed 2 take care of one.
    i'm gonna be a bad mother,,lol

    sherry

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