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It's Never Enough

And when the skies turn gray
And when my eyes go dark
All shall be as it once had been
And I will be alone

Again

  ...Again

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Waiting,
  Where darkness abounds.

The light, the light!
Dear God, the light!

And as the sun peaks high
O'er those snowy mounds
You will see as I see

And you will be awed.

And when a child cries
Gentle rapture against quiet hate
Can you feel as I feel?
Can you be as I am?

Never

  It is never enough.

Silent Death,

Have you come for me?
To ruin that which cannot end,
To take away from this world again?
Is there another whom you wish to take?

I shall be there,
Heedless to the call.
I shall find light in darkness;
Oh bright light! The light!
It grows as it burns
As a rash to my skin
And never does it stop!

Never, never enough.

And while I walk
Where others cannot follow,
Do you forgive me?
Can you forgive me, dear friends?
I have seen all I wanted to,
And it has frightened me so.
Kind friend, pluck these eyes,
And rid me of this rotting,
So overipe.

But my eye is still here,
And I watch furthermore

And it is never...

Never enough.

And when the skies turn gray
And when my eyes go dark
All shall be as it once had been
And I will be alone

Again

  ...Again

Author notes

No, I'm not completely crazy (yet), and I can't tell you why I wrote this. I'm not depressed and I don't think it's from anything to worry about. All in all, just a really random bit of poetry.

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  • XXWolfOfInsanityxX
    October 9, 2008

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    Beautiful

    this is amazing =]
    I like dark writes such as this one but this one
    caught my intrest
    Wow for something random this sure came out great
    <3 great job and keep writting thanks for sharing this terffic poem.
    I hope to see more


  • mydarlinghamburger
    September 16, 2008

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    Awesome work...

    Kept me entranced until the last line, and yet I still wanted more.

    Regarding your author notes, random bits of poetry are always the best kind!!!

    Hope you are well, we should catch up sometime soon...

    Love Lila xoxo


  • BarbedWireButterfly
    September 16, 2008

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    Interesting. Quiet a thought provoking piece of writing. The repetition was snazzy and it gave you a picture in your head. You never say hi anymore though


  • imperfectperfection
    September 15, 2008

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    Dark Beauty

    When skies are dark
    When time plays tricks
    At your door when loneliness knocks
    Pick up the phone
    And call your mom

    Very nicely penned poem though... truly dark beauty.

    Sweetheart, you are not at all crazy, that department has been taken care of by your this crazy mom pretty well ... we all go through like this sometimes... just remember you are not alone for if you ever need, I'm always here for you hun.... take care Love mom