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Words ( Silver )

Voice be my impediment...

ever, I stutter in shyness

w

o

r

d

s

 

became a closed book...

bound and gagged

ever wishful

for this

s

i

l

e

n

c

e

seeking in shadows of life

evermore eerie

faltering

c

a

l

l

i

n

g

for release

 

Forming a trust,

patience

came an understanding

dry mouth quenched liquids

eased smooth

as

l

o

v

e

conquered all.


 

Author notes

No 2

" Never, is it forever "

30 to 100 words

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  • princess Jewelcat22
    September 24
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    Another beautiful Acrostic!!! You are so brilliant and you did a lovely job with this!!
  • trekkergirl silver member
    September 22

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    Just love the way this one is written. Another one of yours that deserves a trophy. As usual I like what you have written.


  • Abe 1
    September 17

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    WOWZA ! dis is fab
    yer sure shown me that feelin
    luv that conquered all
    shyness hey its never easy
    thanx 4 ya entry
    cheers
    abe


    • Reptile Lady gold member
      September 21
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      Thank you for the honor of Silver
      I enjoyed penning this piece of poetry
      J x

  • LadyDementia gold member
    September 16

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    Awesome quote! Love how you've presented this, with the words cascading downwards, neat effect Such a beautiful line of thought, awesome read hun, good luck


  • daviscth silver member
    September 15

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    I just love how you have written this sissy. The imagery is wonderfully created and I think this one is ready for the gold.


  • storiesuntold gold member
    September 15
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    Lovely write here

    So true and spoken so temderly indeed


  • maralisa gold member
    September 15

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    wow julie I think you have done a fantastic take on the promt it dances with emotions and the beauty of sincere love I loved this poem julie good luck in the contestmy friend


  • Sensual Angel gold member
    September 15

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    this is an excellent poem Mum..I don't stand a chance lol

    you've done an amazing job here with this prompt. my favorite part is this: "as love conquered all" very beautiful and your words are powerful and strong.

    excellent Mum. good luck in the contest

    kat


  • perfectsunset
    September 15

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    Ooh very powerful write
    and beautiful take on the prompt;
    A very interesting style of poetry
    you chose to write-- very original too!

    the feeling of love conquering
    all was so well portrayed here,
    i hope to have that full feeling
    one day.

    Best of luck in the contests sis~

    Megz xx.
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