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dancing fall

 

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leaves curl inwardly
colors escape to blend well
agonizing wait

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prompt: haiku in traditional form - fall

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  • Arkbear gold member
    September 16, 2008

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    Mmm...another great motion detected here in this KU' ~

    Not crazy about the font ~

    Love the imagery of leaves curling from dehydration.........agonizing wait is something I anticipate each year.....love the Ozarks!

    God bless you,

    Bear ~

    • carole21
      September 17, 2008
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      thanks

      many thanks for the comments and the HM !!


  • Haiku-bless-you gold member
    September 16, 2008

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    This haiku seems to have a macro view of the colorful fate of leaves, very nicely done.

    Dennis


  • KayJay
    September 15, 2008
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    A nice take from the ordinary approach to Autumn... well done and best of luck...
    Ken