Teddy oh teddy
please wake up
don't be dead
I need you
Can you believe this
I just found you
and you do this.
Wake up I said
I need you
want you
No one else will do.
So wake up won't you.
What?
No!
I don't see it.
What'cha mean
he's wearing a
Do not Resusitate braclet.
Author notes
Okay so it's stupid what can I say. Loved the picture tho
A contest entry
- Do Not Resuscitate by CarolDesjarlais.
1200 points, ended September 21, 2008, 8 entries
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LOL!
Oddly enough, I was in a similar situation as a CNA with a patient... I love the play on the situation; especially the picture! Well done!
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unfortunately I have had to do CPR on patients before at the hospital as well as during the time when I was an EMT. Not my fondest memories to be honest. I always hated doing that.
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I got my first tattoo on my 50th birthday....now, I am seriously considering this... seriously... I think it is a great way to make sure that others let us go when we wish to, when it is right... ty for your entry.
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well it really goes with the picture, and I really enjoyed both the form and rthym, It was cute, a well crafted poem, blessings John
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Thanks I thought it was silly. But when I saw the picture and I knew there was this contest going on... well I just had to do it. Thanks for saying it was cute.
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