I've forgotten your touch
Stood numb with roots buried in the ground
I need the life you once gave unto me
To feel strong once more & face away my demons
Breath your oxygen into my veins
Bid my blood to flow through this limp corpse
Shadows of yesterday etched on my eyes
Look around this scene
Let your iris trace the trees
Feel a cold damp air against your skin
This is the place that we once sinned
See my body cold & wet
Intoxicated & covered in sweat
Drunkenly pouring my heart out to you
Suddenly realised what I need you to do
To lift me up now that I've gone limp
Shade my face away from this rain
I feel your hands grip mine so tight
Palms sweaty & hearts racing
Muffled screams invade my ears
Cover me up & wipe away your tears
Our last kiss will finish this fateful night
Your blood red lips tantalise mine so blue
A taste familar but you don't know who's
Street lamps glow around my head tonight
Goodbye my love, this is my final goodnight
Author notes
Got inspired to write this one last piece about him.
Not sure why, anyways started with how I felt whilst writing and muddled into a daydream I had about outside a nightclub haha
Anyways I was writing in my usual style and decided to throw a bit of rhyme in just for the fun of it, breaks it up a bit?
Comments
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Wow,
Nicely done..
Had me wanting for more..Like i was left hanging.
Like there could be a 2nd part to this.. (oh please let it be, lol)
Very well done.
-Mandi
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This is intoxicating. I long for more! What happens next? It is devastating and exciting simultaneously! this sounds like it could be a brilliant story-line!
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I happen to think it is great and so darkly beautiful... I almost felt like I was there watching like a vouyer as opposed to reading the words you seemed to write effortlessly...I love it !
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To life me up now that I've gone limp
Shade my face away from this rain
I feel your hands grip mine so tight
Palms sweaty & hearts racing
Muffled screams invade my ears
Cover me up & wipe away your tears
Our last kiss will finish this fateful night
cute.
but I don't like rhyme when it isn't consistent.
oh well, to each his own.
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