months since I first learned
why poets write
and how to cry for joy:
I’m still falling
[for you]
through each
.lovestruck.
instant.
when the stars shine brighter,
the night seems longer.
I’d lie here forever.
a bed of nails
and astral trails
the night we were shooting stars
I’m just a girl
it's just this world
pain’s only a sensation
just four letters
just one life
and the seconds pass too quickly…
just this pulsing and throbbing elation
the music’s pumping,
dissolving in my bloodstream—
making me give into temptation
So fuck it all
and let’s make believe
~that forever happens at sixteen~
&hearts
Author notes
First thing I've written after months of writer's block... I don't like it... feel free to rip to shreds.
Ooooh but I need a title, seriously, any suggestions would be appreciated.
I need a good title. Ideas?
Comments
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I think it's great.
If you wanna see suck go read mine. oo
yeah but this is good.
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Writers block sucks, I'll give you that. But this is AMAZING. Actually, all your work is amazing. You are really quite brilliant.
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how bout 'forever at 16?'
i liked it alot! and ya i kno wim going through writers block, and i'll be this way till im less happy, i cna only write wen im depressed....
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