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Cate Michelle - poem #3100 on AP

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Thou art the voice of your father’s father,
breath of your mother’s mother,
desires of your ancestors’
fervent prayers

to come
to bring peace
to make peace
to make well
to make

prayers pulse with reality,


dervish of dancer’s desires
that breathe on their own


thou art

all the voice we need





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Cate Michell weighing in at 8+ pounds, day before yesterday....what a beautiful #23 for me.

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  • moon2u
    September 15, 2008

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    Congratulations sister of my heart
    Cate's first poem from Grandma
    oh boy, get the kleenex again
    She is beautiful, just like you
    hugs moony


  • Night Hope gold member
    September 15, 2008

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    Congratulations on #23, my Sister. Also, congratulations on #3100...both impressive accomplishments, Sweetie. Brava, my dear Friend.

  • strangerforeigner
    September 15, 2008

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    23-woah! Congratulations! It's so true that we are the answered prayers of our ancestors. I think that we have such a sense of independence in our culture that we don't think of where we came from, but your poem reminds us that we all have such a rich history and lineage, no matter who we are.
    Oh, and aaaaawwwww she's beautiful!


  • ten thousand cicadas gold member
    September 15, 2008

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    She is gorgeous, gal! What a beautiful fulfillment of hopes and dreams, a promise of so much more than we can even imagine.

    Abundant blessings upon Cate Michelle and her adoring family.


    Congratulations!