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Ever thought of me

Every thing that I am
Every thing that I used to be
Every thing is ever more

Every glance I wonder
Every look I question
Every minute I search for

Every one is a friend
Every one is a enemy
Every one is who

Every one that I loved
Every one that I held
Every one that was every one to me

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Tamara no 4

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  • chilali
    September 28, 2008

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    This was very lovely and touching. I really love your style of writing. Wonderfully penned Abe. Thank you for sharing


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    September 17, 2008

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    Every .. I love your style the thoughts reap within this poem
    Thank you for your lovely entry in my contest
    Best wishes
    Julie


  • onesugar gold member
    September 17, 2008

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    This to me brings back passed loves, as you reminisce, you pause for a moment and wonder if they are thinking of you...I think we all do that at some point.
    This was a pleasure
    All the best & good luck
    ~sugar~


  • perfectsunset gold member
    September 17, 2008

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    Wow; this was so deeply beautiful,
    heartfelt & touching.

    So much power woven within your words
    and passion penned from the soul.

    This was a lovely write.

    Best of luck in the contest


  • Lislaine
    September 15, 2008
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    Nice poem! I really liked it! GOOD luck on that contest

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