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A Hopeful Wail

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gray as steel
sky presses down
in between the cracks and fractures
of steepled spires of trees
right down to the bud
bearing down to release its petal’d wings
in spite of rage and horrible stage

a baby born in a bathroom
of a shelter
during the storm

come what may
in force of nature
there is hope
breast-stroking
against a maelstrom

toppled dynasties
genocide, cultural holocausts
have not drowned out

the fragile cry
of new beginnings
scrolls up through eye
and sty of devastation






Author notes

an evacuee from Calhoun County gave birth to a girl in the restroom of a shelter


prompt - endurance

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  • azure85 gold member
    September 25

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    What a story of great endurance retold through the format of your poem. It is a wonderful testimony to the meaning of the word, thank you so much.


  • Night Hope gold member
    September 15

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    This is an intense portrayal of such horrific & miraculous events coinciding, my Friend. So many life~affirming experiences you've been through, dear Scribe. Good luck in the contest, Sweetie.