A Birthday Wish by StarEyes at All poetry

tossed about by these winds
a heart that is loved-
and a warmth grows inside,

sharing love, giving hope to all around
making it gently clear,
entwine thee, my soul.

i come close to you now,
kiss your soft lips and bow,
i'll add all of my love,

i'm thinking of you,
sending birthday wishes-
how can i express?...

when you're having your bad days
we're banded together...
soaring on memories wings...

Happy Birthday Tim...

Miss you and love you

Nyetta

Author notes

Another Cento,

Only this one is a collab-cento
Timothy Johnson and Nyetta McClure

Steady and Free Lines 7, 42, 18
A Simple Hug Line 18
Entwine Thee...My Soul Title line
Eternal Weeping Lines 15, 16
Think of me line 11
*A Special Birthday Cake Line 8
Thank You...My Friends Lines 7, 11, 23
*She Soars...He Waits Line 1

*Nyetta McClure

Please tell me what you think

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penman
November 19, 2008
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Wonderful
Very creative and so well expressed. Thank you so much for sharing
storiesuntold
October 3, 2008
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Lovely write
Such a sweet poem as though an embrace is given within the reading of it
- StarEyes
  October 3, 2008
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  Thanks for the comment. This took some work to do Glad you liked it.
Jadeheart 41
September 16, 2008

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Your love shines through with the deepest of admiration. What a beautiful gift you have given from the depths of your heart!
Desire
September 15, 2008

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Precious~
Oh My~ This a Gem for a Gem~ Love this piece You penned!!You are so good at Centos Beautiful~ Touches deep What a Birthday Gift this is
He is certainly missed but always with us

Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweetness
Best wishes too
and my Love & Light~ Desire~*~
Stardust-luvr
September 15, 2008

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such beauty spoken from your soul of the purest of love reaching to the heavens with a true heart. superbly done and you know Tim is smiling from ear to ear with each roaring sigghhh!!! well done and many blessings always xxxx
- StarEyes
  September 15, 2008
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  Thanks hon. I can only hope you are right. It took some time and work to do this, glad you liked it!
  
  and love
  
  Nyetta
Loveandblessings2u
September 15, 2008

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Your poem is only... as beautiful as your heart.
You write the most caring and touching words.
You continue to amaze me with your magic.

Loveandblessings2u & yours always
Love Ya, Twinsy
Joyce
- StarEyes
  September 15, 2008
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  Thanks Twinsy... I will do a cento from you soon I love doing them, if you don't mind me doing that?
  
  Love you Twinsy
  
  Nyetta
imperfectperfection
September 15, 2008

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As always this is yet another beautiful poem you've penned - how do you know which lines to pick to give it shape of another beautiful poem? This is really a very well penned poem... thanks for sharing your talent... take care hun... Love Minoo
- StarEyes
  September 15, 2008
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  Minoo,
  
  To answer your question hon, I am not sure. I find the opening line, and work from there, It does take time, and lots of it, but when you get them done, they are worth it! I wanted to do something special for his birthday, and I think I succeeded in that!
  
  and love
  
  Nyetta
Heavenly Angel
September 15, 2008

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A sweet, gentle, and loving piece, sweet soul!
I know Tim would love this!
Many blessings to you!
Amera
September 15, 2008

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What a beautiful poem by the Queen of Cento poetry. I know he will like this, it's a fantadtic Birthday Dedication.

Love,
Amera♥
Glenn
September 15, 2008
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AWESOME.......................!
what can i say;
its a brilliant piece of writing

thnks for sharing this poem
Carolina Moon
September 15, 2008

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Sis this is simply beautiful. You can feel the love in your words. ~Sigh~
- StarEyes
  September 15, 2008
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  Thanks sis!!! Had to find a way to wish him a Happy Birthday, you know...