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A Birthday Wish



tossed about by these winds
a heart that is loved-
and a warmth grows inside,

sharing love, giving hope to all around
making it gently clear,
entwine thee, my soul.

i come close to you now,
kiss your soft lips and bow,
i'll add all of my love,

i'm thinking of you,
sending birthday wishes-
how can i express?...

when you're having your bad days
we're banded together...
soaring on memories wings...





Happy Birthday Tim...

Miss you and love you

Nyetta

Author notes

Another Cento,

Only this one is a collab-cento
Timothy Johnson and Nyetta McClure

Steady and Free Lines 7, 42, 18
A Simple Hug Line 18
Entwine Thee...My Soul Title line
Eternal Weeping Lines 15, 16
Think of me line 11
*A Special Birthday Cake Line 8
Thank You...My Friends Lines 7, 11, 23
*She Soars...He Waits Line 1


*Nyetta McClure

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  • penman gold member
    November 19, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very creative and so well expressed. Thank you so much for sharing


  • storiesuntold gold member
    October 3, 2008
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    Lovely write

    Such a sweet poem as though an embrace is given within the reading of it


    • StarEyes
      October 3, 2008
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      Thanks for the comment. This took some work to do Glad you liked it.


  • Jadeheart 41
    September 16, 2008

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    Your love shines through with the deepest of admiration. What a beautiful gift you have given from the depths of your heart!


  • Desire gold member
    September 15, 2008

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    Precious~

    Oh My~ This a Gem for a Gem~ Love this piece You penned!!You are so good at Centos Beautiful~ Touches deep What a Birthday Gift this is
    He is certainly missed but always with us

    Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweetness
    Best wishes too
    and my Love & Light~ Desire~*~


  • Stardust-luvr
    September 15, 2008

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    such beauty spoken from your soul of the purest of love reaching to the heavens with a true heart. superbly done and you know Tim is smiling from ear to ear with each roaring sigghhh!!! well done and many blessings always xxxx

    • StarEyes
      September 15, 2008
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      Thanks hon. I can only hope you are right. It took some time and work to do this, glad you liked it!

      and love

      Nyetta


  • Loveandblessings2u gold member
    September 15, 2008

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    Your poem is only... as beautiful as your heart.
    You write the most caring and touching words.
    You continue to amaze me with your magic.

    Loveandblessings2u & yours always
    Love Ya, Twinsy
    Joyce

    • StarEyes
      September 15, 2008
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      Thanks Twinsy... I will do a cento from you soon I love doing them, if you don't mind me doing that?

      Love you Twinsy

      Nyetta


  • imperfectperfection
    September 15, 2008

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    As always this is yet another beautiful poem you've penned - how do you know which lines to pick to give it shape of another beautiful poem? This is really a very well penned poem... thanks for sharing your talent... take care hun... Love Minoo

    • StarEyes
      September 15, 2008
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      Minoo,

      To answer your question hon, I am not sure. I find the opening line, and work from there, It does take time, and lots of it, but when you get them done, they are worth it! I wanted to do something special for his birthday, and I think I succeeded in that!

      and love

      Nyetta


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    September 15, 2008

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    A sweet, gentle, and loving piece, sweet soul!
    I know Tim would love this!
    Many blessings to you!


  • Amera gold member
    September 15, 2008

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    What a beautiful poem by the Queen of Cento poetry. I know he will like this, it's a fantadtic Birthday Dedication.

    Love,
    Amera♥


  • Glenn
    September 15, 2008
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    AWESOME.......................!

    what can i say;
    its a brilliant piece of writing


    thnks for sharing this poem


  • Carolina Moon gold member
    September 15, 2008

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    Sis this is simply beautiful. You can feel the love in your words. ~Sigh~


    • StarEyes
      September 15, 2008
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      Thanks sis!!! Had to find a way to wish him a Happy Birthday, you know...

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