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Fractured

Listen closely for I have something to say, the world around me has made me this way.  I’ve waged my battles through treacherous paths and battered and bruised every depth of my heart.  When I try to live a normal life another distraction deters my flight.  There is no ending to my despair for whatever I touch becomes a dare.  Let me be myself I say, but even then without resolve my endless agony burns; beware!  To open up and let you in, I know I’m risking another spin.  I know I’m alive because when I sleep, the moments of pain around me creep.  How can it be that I have toiled so long only to live another wrong?  Each time normalities at my reach, the fractured memories wake my sleep.  Alone in life with no release, I feel the walls caving in.  But do not worry for I’ve learnt to stay, alive again for one more day.

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  • PhenollBarbidoll
    September 15, 2008

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    i say the title fits perfectly. your body and soul has been fractured, not completely broken, and as if your living one more day in hopes to heal yourself...awesome write

    • Despinas1
      September 16, 2008
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      Terrence

      Thank you so much for reading my poem; and for taking the time to submit your comments. One of the greatest pleasures in life for me is writing my thoughts on paper. It is the most cathartic, therapeutic, and powerful drives within me, both spiritually and intellectually. I value your feedback immensely. Once again. "Thank you".