She stands high,
Above the road,
Gripping the handrail,
And leaning out,
Prepearing for the end,
Her world is,
Falling apart,
And the pain,
Is tearing her apart,
But know she's going,
To stop it for good.
Breathe.
Breathe.
Breathe.
Forget the deciet,
The lies that hurt her,
Knowing that she,
Isn't worthy to,
Know the truth.
Forget the pain,
That kept her awake,
And made her bleed,
Again and agian.
Forget everybody,
That beat her down,
Hating her,
Killing her soul,
Breaking her heart.
Forget the boy,
That lied and cheated,
He got into her heart,
Than into her bed,
And then left her alone.
Forget her fears,
Of what is lying beyond,
The wall of Death,
If she'll be missed,
If someone will care.
Breathe.
Breathe.
Just breathe.
Forget everything,
Let go,
And be free.
A contest entry
- MUHAHAHAH!!!!!! by Dirty and Broken.
800 points, ended October 16, 2008, 35 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think?
Comments
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I like it, it really say alot, the line breaks are off a little like you could put knowing that she isnt worthy, to know the truth. together but really good =) its very unique
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well pened
your piece was very heart felt, each line and stanza had me all the way to the ending, great work
Good luck
Rend
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This is great! Well okay, it's actually very sad. But you did well at putting this into the right perspective. It's sad how tranquil this makes me feel though you're speaking of tragic and painful things that led up to this girl preparing to leap away from life. I like this though.
Great write!
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Thank you
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wow...i love this.....but i don't think the author's note it needed....but that's not going to count against you, 'kay?
thanks for entering, i really like this
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Haha well I might get rid of it then Thank you
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i love it...
i could feel the pain of her trough your words...^^
good job...^^
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amazing write xxxx
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