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Sayonara

Missing image

Morning arises

Many things to do

This heart realizes

The minutes are few

 

Gather my seabags

Suitcase , guitar

Heavy this heart sags

Our distance turns far

 

Overwhelming emotion

Flooding do rise

Daunting the notion

Of our final goodbyes...

C2008vduna

 

Author notes

March 22, 2008 last time I saw my daughter and son.

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  • Sue Cardwell gold member
    September 21, 2008

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    Thank you for your entry in the final contest of the series. An excellent poem dealing with the hardships of life. Rhyme and flow are very good making this poem a joy to read.

    All the best and please join us in any future contests we may run for rhyming poetry.

    Sue and Jeff

  • ecrivain01
    September 18, 2008
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    Life can be very hard ...

    sometimes. Good luck with working through this difficult situation.