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Freakin' Youngin's

I'm just a kid
I don't know anything
I don't have that hallowed mind
That lets me be like you
I know I know everything
Cause you don't have all the answers
I'm just a kid without a cause
I'm stupid, I'm not you

You've got no idea
What the hell I've gone through
I've watched a million die, million cry
I've watched them bleed with you
I'm just a kid
I don't know nothin'
I'm just a freak with a big head
I'm just a kid without a cause
I'm stupid, can't be you

What is wise but to know not wise
What foolery is this
What inflated personality
Makes me a joke, you kid!
I'm all about improving
I'm all rotting away
I'm all for one and one for all
I'm stupid, but at least I'm not like you

Author notes

Eh, I have no idea what I'm doing right now. I'm kinda tired, but I really don't think I should get to bed. So I'm just letting some thoughts ooze out. Maybe one day I'll have enough years on me to be called an "Adult". Righto, guys.

To Lain: Look Up.

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Comments


  • SwedenNY
    September 15, 2008
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    It gets wicked at the end.

    Like whip snapping. Great job.


  • Jesaan gold member
    September 15, 2008

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    In response to your Author notes.."Adult"...I'd say you fit the bill now!!!
    Enjoyed the read!.."I know I know everything cause you don't have all the answers" A good line


    • Zixaphir
      September 15, 2008
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      I fit the bill, eh? I dunno, I have this thought in me that as long as there is someone older than me, they have a bit of leverage in calling me a kid. It hits me most when eighty year olds call forty year olds kids.