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No One Else

I'm a bit crazy but that's ok,
Because you still love me anyway.
I love the way you always flick your hair,
Even if there is nothing really there.

Insults seem to slip off you,
Something I wish I could do.
Your ok with my low self-esteem,
And you never act like your supreme.

We're both a little eccentric,
But that's others stupid verdict.
You play a little too much WOW,
But I cope with that some how.

I love it when you get a little jealous,
And at Jared Leto's name you get anxious.
You are the only one that matters,
Even when I have the urge to shatter.

Every time you give me a kiss on the cheek,
My heart does a flutter and my knees get weak.
I never ever want you to go away,
I want to see you every single day.

There is no one else but you,
Who loves me for all I do.

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This is for Tom!!!

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  • Burnished
    September 16, 2008

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    lol so thinking hes god isnt acting like hes supreme hey oh and its spelt "WoW" hehe. great poem though. you can show your feelings so well in poetry, something which chould be praised and admired.


  • PUAsupporter
    September 16, 2008

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    That was really good ash,well portrayed. Also being a friend, i understand it. i hope you guys keep in keepin on. u 2 are great


  • PureUA
    September 15, 2008

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    This made my heart beat fast again, you know me so well it made me laugh...

    "I love the way you always flick your hair,
    Even if there is nothing really there....

    I love it when you get a little jealous,
    And at Jared Leto's name you get anxious."

    Ohhh, I wish I was talented enough to write like this about you, but Im not, so instead I'll just keep telling you, and showing you how much I love you.

    I love you, and I love the poem as well =D