I would scream in my head,
"Bring Forth The Enemy and
Let them fear ruin!"
Because that person totally
Deserves to face the blackout
I could give with these fists.
I have eyes set to kill,
I will try all kinds of ways
To watch this enemy take
A seven story fall to the ground,
Make sure he won't just be blind,
He will have dead eyes at the end of the day.
As he lies lifeless beneath the surface,
I smell his blood crying out for help,
But even if he tried to escape from pain,
Every bridge burned,
there will be no new hope for him,
Oh the blood I smell,
I won't care about his death,
I won't care about him being gone
Because I already waved farewell to him
Even before he was buried in vegas.
IN TIMES OF DISTRESS,
I would scream in my mind,
"BRING FORTH THE ENEMY and
LET THEM FEAR RUIN!"
Because that person totally
Deserves to face THE BLACKOUT
I could give with these fists.
I have EYES SET TO KILL,
I will try all kinds of ways
To watch this enemy take
A SEVEN STORY FALL to the ground,
Make sure he won't just be blind,
He will have DEAD EYES at the end of the day.
As he lies LIFELESS BENEATH THE SURFACE,
I smell his blood crying out for help,
But even if he tried to ESCAPE FROM PAIN,
EVERY BRIDGE BURNED,
there will be no NEW HOPE for him,
Oh the blood I smell,
I won't care about his death,
I won't care about him being gone
Because I already waved FAREWELL to him
Even before he was BURIED IN VEGAS.
Author notes
Put "Music is the only thing that makes sense" in your author's notes so I know you read this.
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Bring Forth The Enemy -
http://www.myspace.com/bringforththeenemy
Let them fear ruin -
http://www.myspace.com/letthemfearruin
In times of distress -
http://www.myspace.com/intimesofdistress
The Blackout -
http://www.myspace.com/theblackout
Eyes Set To Kill -
http://www.myspace.com/eyessettokill
Seven Story Fall -
http://www.myspace.com/sevenstoryfall
Dead Eyes -
http://www.myspace.com/deadeyesnc
Lifeless -
http://www.myspace.com/lifelessuk
Beneath the Surface -
http://www.myspace.com/beneaththesurfaceaz
Escape From Pain -
http://www.myspace.com/escapefrompain
Every Bridge Burned -
http://profile.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=user.viewprofile&friendid=4826535
New Hope -
http://www.myspace.com/newhopeitaly
Farewell -
http://www.myspace.com/farewell
Buried In Vegas -
http://www.myspace.com/buriedinvegas
THERE WE GO!!!
A contest entry
- Can you take on the challenge? by outofbreath.
475 points, ended November 1, 2008, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wow. Such powerful words! I can feel the emotions coming through the screen, and good use of bands!
"To watch this enemy take
A seven story fall to the ground,"
Nice!
*~Ice
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Great work


