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Bring Forth The Enemy

In times of distress,
I would scream in my head,
"Bring Forth The Enemy and
Let them fear ruin!"
Because that person totally
Deserves to face the blackout
I could give with these fists.

I have eyes set to kill,
I will try all kinds of ways
To watch this enemy take
A seven story fall to the ground,
Make sure he won't just be blind,
He will have dead eyes at the end of the day.

As he lies lifeless beneath the surface,
I smell his blood crying out for help,
But even if he tried to escape from pain,
Every bridge burned,
there will be no new hope for him,
Oh the blood I smell,
I won't care about his death,
I won't care about him being gone
Because I already waved farewell to him
Even before he was buried in vegas.



IN TIMES OF DISTRESS,
I would scream in my mind,
"BRING FORTH THE ENEMY and
LET THEM FEAR RUIN!"
Because that person totally
Deserves to face THE BLACKOUT
I could give with these fists.

I have EYES SET TO KILL,
I will try all kinds of ways
To watch this enemy take
A SEVEN STORY FALL to the ground,
Make sure he won't just be blind,
He will have DEAD EYES at the end of the day.


As he lies LIFELESS BENEATH THE SURFACE,
I smell his blood crying out for help,
But even if he tried to ESCAPE FROM PAIN,
EVERY BRIDGE BURNED,
there will be no NEW HOPE for him,
Oh the blood I smell,
I won't care about his death,
I won't care about him being gone
Because I already waved FAREWELL to him
Even before he was BURIED IN VEGAS.



Author notes

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Bring Forth The Enemy -
http://www.myspace.com/bringforththeenemy

Let them fear ruin -
http://www.myspace.com/letthemfearruin

In times of distress -
http://www.myspace.com/intimesofdistress

The Blackout -
http://www.myspace.com/theblackout

Eyes Set To Kill -
http://www.myspace.com/eyessettokill

Seven Story Fall -
http://www.myspace.com/sevenstoryfall

Dead Eyes -
http://www.myspace.com/deadeyesnc

Lifeless -
http://www.myspace.com/lifelessuk

Beneath the Surface -
http://www.myspace.com/beneaththesurfaceaz

Escape From Pain -
http://www.myspace.com/escapefrompain

Every Bridge Burned -
http://profile.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=user.viewprofile&friendid=4826535

New Hope -
http://www.myspace.com/newhopeitaly

Farewell -
http://www.myspace.com/farewell


Buried In Vegas -
http://www.myspace.com/buriedinvegas

THERE WE GO!!!























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  • outofbreath
    October 17, 2008

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    Wow. Such powerful words! I can feel the emotions coming through the screen, and good use of bands!
    "To watch this enemy take
    A seven story fall to the ground,"
    Nice!

    *~Ice


  • Georgia La Mariposa
    September 17, 2008
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    Great work