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Take Me To The Rock Show

Oh honey, I love you
I will treat you right,
I will hold you tight,
I will wake you up
When you have nightmares
In the middle of the night,
I will protect you
From your fears,
I will help you
Dry your tears...
But you have to do something for me...

Buy these tickets
So that I can go to
See that rockband
Performing...

Make sure I don't miss it,
Make sure I am at the front row,
Make sure I get to meet the band...
Just honey, take me to the rock show...

Oh honey, I love you,
I will give you money,
I will give you the things you want,
I will make you happy,
I will try hard to not make you cry...

Just buy me these tickets,
I want to see this band,
They're my favourite,
I've been dreaming to meet them
All my life...

Make sure I can get some merchandises,
Make sure I'll get an autograph,
Make sure I'll get a chance
To go up there on stage
To be with that band
Because I am great big fan,
Honey, just take me to the rock show.

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5. Take me to the rock show.

something i just threw together...

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  • Topaze gold member
    September 15, 2008

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    Very well done, thank you for this fine entry in this contest. PS check last stanza, first line. Nice Write!