I caused you great pain,
feelings down the drain,
Infidelity is my game!
I'll never have you again.
Author notes
This was written for a contest of 18 words only and on inspiration resulting from picture. It has nothing to do with personal behavior whatsoever 
meaning I loath unfaithfulness
A contest entry
- (Adult) not a quickie. take your time. by jinsays.
500 points, ended September 16, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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awe I like it. It short with a simpe ryme But adorable with a memorizing picture
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Short and sweet, and yes, very true.
Thank you for your submission, best of luck to you,
jin
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Excellent
Ah, tis a fine write, indeed. You've expressed yourself quite well, as usual. And as you probably realized, for some of us, your title reminded me of an old book/movie: "Gone With the Wind". I'm sure you've heard of it; for those who haven't a link in a moment:
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My dear,
Always encouraging me and giving me more and more impetus to write. Yes of course, who doesnt know GONE WITH THE WIND, the eternal movie
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Aye, I knew you would know it, however, I don't know how many of today's youth would be aware of it. Hope you have a good evening. Your reply brought a smile to my face.
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Well I am sure they do know, here they put it on tv a lot. As how interested they would be instead of watching all those sci-fi or action movies, well that is the question
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