In that final moment,
When Angel lost his soul,
Buffy knew she had to find a way,
to some how make him whole,
He taunted her,
He left her flowers,
Impending doom,
In so few hours,
He had killed so many people,
No longer did he care,
he fell back in with Spike and Dru,
Much to Buffy's dispair,
He set on his revenge,
Killing once again,
Doing all he could,
to put the world in pain,
Willow and Xander were hurt,
While Kendra lost her life,
Giles was taken hostage,
Much to Buffy's strife,
Angel performed the ritual,
But couldn't make it work,
Buffy knew deep in her heart,
This fate she couldn't shirk,
Acathla awoke, just as Angel
was reformed,
Buffy stared in disbelief,
and remained folorn,
She kissed him close,
wished them never be apart,
She felt every bit of pain
as it trembled through her heart,
She picked up the sword,
Buffy broke as tears filled in her eyes,
She stabbed him, then with a whisper of her name,
Our tragic hero dies,
Author notes
This is the episode Becoming Part2 and it is so sad 
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One thing I would point out is that it would be better if you capitalized only the first letter of the first word of each sentence OR the first letter of each line, because in some places you seem to be very wishy washy on what rule you want to follow regarding that. Other than that, another well written poem for another well written episode. I think I may add all these to my favorites
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Nicely done Georgia. You tell the story well, and maintained the tempo, flow and rhyming perfectly.
Bravo
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