life what can i say about it...
when things move at the pace you don't like
when someone turn away;you see around
and say is this the life....
life what can i say about it..
when someone change the way and you feel
life is all gone and there are no words to say
life what can i say about it..
when someone leaves you crying
and you don't have a shoulder to cry
life what can i say about it..
when someone turn down your luv and you look around
and say, life without you ll be always like a wound..
life what can i say about it..
when you bent down on knees and sayy
its gonna b okay and You'll retract d old way
life what can i say about it
when someone sit aside and sayy
its the life and now you need to mke ur own way .
and than you move ahead and say.....
"life is journey and sometimes we have to find our own way"
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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i really liked this poem. its a perfect description of the way my life is going. heart broken. the flow is really good and i love the diction. its a sad write, its a true write, and i totally cried. this poem made me relive a part of my life i've tried to burry. it evokes such deep emotion. great job!!



