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Life

life what can i say about it...
when things move at the pace you don't like
when someone turn away;you see around
and say is this the life....

life what can i say about it..
when someone change the way and you feel
life is all gone and there are no words to say


life what can i say about it..
when someone leaves you crying
and you don't have a shoulder to cry


life what can i say about it..
when someone turn down your luv and you look around
and say, life without you ll be always like a wound..

life what can i say about it..
when you bent down on knees and sayy
its gonna b okay and You'll retract d old way

life what can i say about it
when someone sit aside and sayy
its the life and now you need to mke ur own way .
and than you move ahead and say.....

"life is journey and sometimes we have to find our own way"

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  • first forgotten
    September 20
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    i really liked this poem. its a perfect description of the way my life is going. heart broken. the flow is really good and i love the diction. its a sad write, its a true write, and i totally cried. this poem made me relive a part of my life i've tried to burry. it evokes such deep emotion. great job!!