A breeze comes from the void
Hollow eyes run paranoid over the horizon
Chapped lips drip with wishes unfulfilled
The unfamiliar gift can't run forever
Every grain of sand falls stoic
Glowing with the silence of mortality
Save the tears, you'll need them in time
Vaporized inside a body sedated
The solstice comes without mercy
On the drop of a pin, we go up in flames
A contest entry
- ~Ablaze~ by x Gemini x.
500 points, ended September 30, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Thank you for entering my contest.
This is an interesting way of looking at the prompt. Not bad, it was quite stimulating, with the vocabulary and phrasing.
Nicly done
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