Spreads my soul as fevers do
Love has no end
Feelings sought and found
Disappearing just as fast
Give me what I have lost
Reassure love returns
Better when renewed
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt Contest 10 entries 30 words or less by mysticstorm.
475 points, ended September 15, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I like this.. tight and effective. love the last line, very nice.
Well done, enjoyed it,
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Thank you Wendy for the compliment on my poem. So happy you enjoyed it. Don
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this is wonderful and can be thought of in so many ways
i liked this very much
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Thank you my dear for the compliments on my poem. Happy to hear you enjoyed it. Don
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wow this is a good one! quite places!!!! great job
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Thank you hun for the compliments on my poem. Happy you enjoyed it. Don
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You say this very well - and it connects well because it's a universal feeling. A very beautiful poem on love and what it can do to us.
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Thank you for the compliments on my poem. Happy to hear you enjoyed it. Don
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I feel these words as if I too have lost someone cdear. You took the picture prompt and ran with it. This is intense and written with so few words. I have missed you musing poet, glad to read you again.
Much Love ♥
Renee
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Thank you for the compliments on my poem my friend. Happy you enjoyed it. Don
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all of your poems are just sooooooooooooooo nice,you just reading it and it takes you on a journey,a story,something so wonderful
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Thank you for the compliments my dear!! Happy you enjoyed it. Don
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How sweet...love does so much for us and sometimes we need a time to renew...lovely thoughts...
thank you for entering!
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Thank you my friend! Always a pleasure hearing from you. Happy you enjoyed my poem. Don
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My Dearest Brother,
What a wonderful take on the prompt! And you know, if it truly could be better when renewed, then maybe this world would be a lot better! Great job my brother!
Best of luck in this contest!
and love
Nyetta
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Thank you Nyetta for the compliments on my poem. Happy you enjoyed it. Don
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If only it could be so.. better when renewed!
Lovely write for the prompt my friend!
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Thank you Jacks! Always a pleasure hearing from you. Don
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