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A Gift

A gift holds joy
Only once recieved.
My love for you
Is the only gift I have.
Will you not take it
And make it yours?
Or am I not worthy
Of returned affection?
Rejection of the gift
Renders it meaningless.
So too shall you
Ruin my love.
Please take this,
My love.
Bring me joy by
Accepting my gift to you.

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First attempt at a contest...or ideed, writing a poem due to a prompt.

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    September 17, 2008

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    Indeed an honest emotional journey of the poetic heart......I love it..well done..and thanks for sharing it...


  • Yawgmoth
    September 15, 2008
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    This is sad how dare someone not accept that most wonderful gift "Love". Yours-Damien