dear sweety,
you ask for pefect guys
what perfection means
except perception.
what is loveable is perfect
it clouds the sky of holes
rationalizee short comings
condone mistakes
a perfect guy fits into it.
I fulfill expectations
when you have love for me,
otherwise always gasping for breath
touching your chord
that decides to respond in disharmony.
you are beloved to me
like your naughty little ways
as my dear child itself,
do I become perfect guy
without questioned by you.
exact fit of minds
happen in air,
acknowledge each other perfect;
but we are rocks
to be chisselled
to fit one into other.
still friction holds us
not love of air's logic,
finding perfect guy in me
is as remote as
finding stars in a broad day light.
Author notes
contest
erfect guy
Author: Venu gopal
About author,
when I am not writing I am hydrologist working for water
I am civil engineer, holds doctorate degree in water resources, I love playing tennis, jogging and swimming, inaddition to writing poetry
A contest entry
- The perfect guy [males only] by written-in-ink.
800 points, ended October 3, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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"you ask for perfect guys
what perfection means
except perception."
i thought those three lines were brilliant :] because there is no such thing as the perfect person. it's just common sense to know that.
good luck in the contest ! :]
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awww sad
but im glad that you entered my contest papi
very nice write
thank you so much and good luck -
you are beloved to me
but we are rocks
to be chisselled
to fit one into other.
that's nice penning
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